
Roxy is one of the most famous brand-name things, such as accessories, bags, wallets, purses, shoes, clothes, watches...It was so famous, a lot of people also love them..
The most popular thing are clothes, because people have to wear them everyday..Also accessories, they make us more good-looking...
I love Roxy, because it's fashionable, cute and cool, but it's a bit expensive..But some people love Guess, Gucci, LV, Layer...Another person, another opinion...
For me I prefer Roxy. Roxy is awesome..
Good job, Kanika!
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'Roxy is one of the most famous brand-name things, such as accessories, bags, wallets, purses, shoes, clothes, watches...'
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'Roxy is one of the most famous brand-names. It has such accessories as bags, wallets, purses..'
OKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk,,Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! ^^
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Nooooooooooooooo Problem, Kkkkkkkkkkkkkanika!
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