Wednesday 16 March 2011

The Woman On Holiday^^


On holiday this year me and my family went to the beach.Because we wanted to get fresh air from the sea and we wanted to swam in the sea ,too.We went to the hotel and prepare our things then we came out of the room.Suddenly I saw one woman maybe 26 or 27 years old with sun glasses,brown curly hair,white skin with red dress dropped her key room near my feet then I
"Excuse me auntie you dropped your key!"I shouted but she was very fast.After that my parents call me so I look at them but when I look back she lost.
We came near the beach and tried to found the restaurant but when I looked far to the beach I saw one woman with red dress was sitting under the palm tree ,so I though the woman maybe the woman that dropped the key. So I walked to her and called her
"Excuse me auntie is this your key?''I asked
but she cried...!!!
''oh yes this is my key.''she answered then she continue to cried.
''What happened to you?''I asked her
''I lost my dog!"
''Really can I help you to found it''I tell her
''Oh yes thank!"
''Can you tell me about your dog''
''Oh it black ,small, curly hair, and specially the yellow bell on it neck'' she told
''Oh yes I will found it for you''
''thank you very much''
After that the woman and I are walking along the beach to find her dog,but we could not found it,
and then we walk back to the hotel. Suddenly we arrived at the hotel and we heard a noise of a dog in the hotel.
I ask the women "Do you heard it?"
"Yes i heard it sound like my dog" the women said.Then we went to see together.
It was her dog. She run to her dog hug and kiss it.
She was really happy after found her dog.
After she found her dog she say thank you to me and we are also make friend with each other.it was a little problem that she lose a dog and found it back,but it is a good time for me that I can help someone when they have problem and it was a great holiday for me and my family on the beach.

2 comments:

  1. Good story!

    You wrote: 'We came near the beach and tried to found the restaurant...'

    Better would be 'We came near the beach and tried to find the restaurant...'

    'to' is followed by the infinitive.

    I enjoyed reading this, well done!

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  2. thank you for reading this I will try my best:)

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