Wednesday 16 February 2011

The romantic nightmare in the haunted house by the Creek!






Once upon the time there was a placed in the countryside named Norfolk. It had a lot of beautiful views. Creek is a home to birds, insects and other different kinds of fish. The tall big tree surrounded the creek is seemed like an ocean of green color. The hills stand very strong like an elephants. They also add to the attraction of the place. This is the reason why many people from towns and the cities made this place a perfect place for their holiday or picnic. Unknown to many visitors, there is one particular old house where the villager would not even dare to come close to the house because of its strange story.

One day a group of 5 university students came to visit Norfolk for an overnight picnic. As they drove close to the place, they decided to set up their tents away from the crowd to relax. Between the five of them there was one of the student name '' Nick Sip''. Nick was the owner of the modern and high quality car, Nick was rich and handsome. Nick was intelligent but polite. Nick got sparky brown hair, blue eyes and long ears. Nick was wearing a black T-shirt and a jean. Nick came from the rich family, Nick's father owned many company in European countries and the United States. However this place is too crowd for them so they kept driving around to find the place they wanted and at last they found it. The place was really away from the crowd. It was an abandoned old wooden house.

After enjoying the windy and sunny day by the creek the sun began to disappear. They decided to go back to the old house by the creek. Nick started to fix his tent but he was stopped from doing it, because his friends had agreed to sleep inside the house and because it was raining outside.

Dinner was over, the fun was over, their tired body needed some rest. So they did, they slept together. Suddenly Nick and one of his friend saw a black butterfly and they follows it.

The butterfly took them to a very mysterious door. He and his friend went back because they were so tire. However Nick really wanted to know what was in the old mysterious door. The house felt silent, outside of the house the water was fallen down heavily seem like a big rain.

Nick follow the butterfly to the last mysterious door that he and his friend had gone too. There was an old man and old woman was standing by the door way to welcome him. The old man was wearing a uniform which is full of blood, the old woman look like a vampire, but Nick still talked to them.

About a minute later Nick saw a very beautiful girl cam and asked him '' Hello master why did you came in here? '' Nick said '' I just followed the butterfly ''. The girl said ''You shouldn't..''.


Before she finished her words the old man and woman came in. The old woman gave Nick a warm embrace. As the woman embraced him, he could feel the woman's body was so cold like the ice at the north pole. When he looked at her eyes it turned red and her hare began to stand like a big monster. He took the girl hand and tried to ran away from the woman.

Then the old woman open the door for him and showed that the bad things will happen to him and his friends with in tomorrow. In that door he could see he and his friends with their tongues cut, had no eyes, and were wearing the bloody clothes.


Suddenly he ran through another door. He and the girl was safe right now. He asked the girl all about her. The girl's name Mariposa. She came from a rich family but she was lost in this house for 2 years. Nick started to feel in love with her. He was trying to flirt her but she refused, she told Nick that she was a ghost!Nick feel very sad, but he feel that he got wet, when he turned back he saw the old man and woman was hitting Mariposa.He wanted to saved Mariposa but the other ghost is chasing him so he ran and ran.

Suddenly he felt that there was a hand touching his face and he began to scream and open his eyes. It was only his friends.They asked him why he was screaming. He told them that he was having a nightmare.

In the early morning, the villager went to the farms. They were surprised to see people in that old house. The students told them that they were on a picnic and spent the night in the house. The villagers told them how brave they were because 3 ghosts appeared in this house during every full moon. If they slept in this house for 2 days they will die mysteriously in the house with no reason. Upon hearing this, the student's knee began to shake and left the house immediately. This is why Nick had a Nightmare last night. However, Nick still wondering about Mariposa, but he was so happy to see his friends.

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