This blog is the work of young students from Phnom Penh, Cambodia. They study at ACE in the Young Learners 10 class. This is their first blog.
Saturday, 12 March 2011
Roxy is fashionable
Roxy is one of the most famous brand-name things, such as accessories, bags, wallets, purses, shoes, clothes, watches...It was so famous, a lot of people also love them..
The most popular thing are clothes, because people have to wear them everyday..Also accessories, they make us more good-looking...
I love Roxy, because it's fashionable, cute and cool, but it's a bit expensive..But some people love Guess, Gucci, LV, Layer...Another person, another opinion...
For me I prefer Roxy. Roxy is awesome..
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Good job, Kanika!
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'Roxy is one of the most famous brand-name things, such as accessories, bags, wallets, purses, shoes, clothes, watches...'
Better would be:
'Roxy is one of the most famous brand-names. It has such accessories as bags, wallets, purses..'
OKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk,,Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! ^^
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Nooooooooooooooo Problem, Kkkkkkkkkkkkkanika!
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