Ghost House

1976 in Phnom Penh there was one family lived in a big house with happiness.In the house had five members. Mike was the youngest boy the house, he was fifteen years old. Toey was Mike sister she twenty years old. Mr. Golf and Mrs. Peak were they parent. Mr. Golf was the doctor. This family looked so happy.


One day in the middle of the night. They were sleeping and the group of the robber had came in the house to get some money. Mike had heard some noise from the door and he went to see. The group of robber had seen Mike and tried to caught him. The sound of the gun had came in so loud and the family were shouting cause the robber had killed Mike. The robber had killed all that family and took everything from the house. The house that fulled with blood had kept for ten years. the people that lived near that house had move away to another village. every night they had heard the ghost in the house cried loudly.


One day two brother had came to lived in the house. Bie was the old brother and film was the young brother. when he open the door the wind was blowing strongly and the sky was becoming dark. Bie and Film were stilled go in the house. the two bro had cleaned the house with so tired. When Bie were taking a shower the water were becoming red as the blood. He shouted and ran out to Film room. '' Hay! Film it wound be something wrong with this house, we cannot stay here.'' said Bie '' Stop! What's happen to u?'' Said Film '' While I taking a shower the water is becoming blood.'' said Bie '' No! I still live in this house and find what happen with this house said Film '' But.....'' said Bie '' Stop!'' said Film. The night had came. Bie were sleeping and Film was stilled reading a book. The sound of cried and laughed had came in. Film had seen one woman run in front the door than he followed her. That woman was Toey. Film pick up his pencil and Toey had gone. He went back to his room and sleep. Bie was dreaming about the house that happen in 1976. The morning had come and the two brother were going to the pagoda and called the monk to the house. The monk had took that ghost to next life and the two brother were stilled live in the house and pray for the ghost everyday.


At the end I think that Bie and Film is doing correct. Finally, I fell so exciting when I wrote this blog.Last nigh when I wrote this story I felt so frighten but i still write it until the end. Thank for enjoy reading my post and please tell me if i have any mistake. BYE!!!